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Curious that Dylan is the only one who sees his innie as like a whole ass dude. Like Helena is all 'I am a person, you are not', Mark clearly sees his innie as an extension of himself, and Irving has it a bit more separate but does seem to think of it to some extent as 'me, but I don't remember/we are the same person in diferent circumstances'. Meanwhile Dylan is like 'tha's a whole other dude he is a quantum variable of me, we are capable of similar things bc we share a flesh suit, but we are two separate dudes'.
#as Ortega y Gasset said yo doy yo I mis circunstancias#severance spoilers#severance#this is not a criticism btw just an observation
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We've all seen the talk about the tree of wisdom in the wiggles the rattlin bog song... but is anyone talking about the buff purple wiggle in the bouncing balls song, or...?
#random#the wiggles#rattlin bog#tree of wisdom#bouncing balls#purple wiggle#i dont know that mans name but you know who im talking about right?#when hes not making educational entertainment for toddlers hes making thirst traps on tiktok?#this is not a criticism btw just an observation#ramblings#mumblr
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I was wondering why I didn't find the Junimos from Stardew Valley cute, even though a lot of people apparently do. And then I realized I grew up seeing a lot of mascots and logos with the same dot-eyed cutesy designs. So when I looked at the Junimos they'd feel more like a Pelican Town mascot than a forest spirit.
They literally feel corporate to me.






#snake talks#snake's image post#not art#sdv junimos#this is not to criticize the creator of SDV btw#just an interesting observation that I think could stem from cultural differences (again) (or maybe not idk)
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I'm only halfway through the second phase of Predathos (which, to be clear is an incredible vibe for a bossfight, love a good head & hands/multitarget-same-entity boss) but I cannot shake the feeling of disappointment and just dissatisfaction I have had with this campaign that definitely started with Dusk/Yu, got followed up handily with the first Delilah/Sun Tree fight and then has been unfortunately reinforced with every discussion surrounding the Prime Deities since Hearthdell. This campaign is fascinating to pick apart, I have been really enjoying pulling apart why it isn't working compared to C1 or C2. But as much as I'm having fun dissecting where the worldbuilding has led to the current weaknesses in the gods' argument or reading other people's incisive commentary on the lack of personalities on the Ruby Vanguard's end, the "girlfailure" nonsense, etc etc, man do I wish this campaign was better than it is.
There are so many avenues of improvement -
Matt telling everyone to prep and write characters for this campaign instead of a C2-esque character-focused campaign.
Matt working religious organisations into the world properly.
The cast engaging with Marquet as a genuine location rather than set-dressing.
Otohan, Ozo and the rest of the Vanguard having more than "*insert snappy line here*" for their personalities.
No Delilah.
Bell's Hells having an iota of curiosity for anything outside of their own selves, including but not limited to: the gods, religious worship, the Elemental Titans and why they were sundered, how the people of Exandria feel about the gods, Vasselheim and its role in suppressing information about Predathos, Ludinus Da'Leth's plan and how it would still break the world if they did it in his place
I don't know why all of this fell into place in the way that it did, but it did. We can endlessly speculate why - the cast resting on their laurels after C2, not having enough time between the animated shows and Daggerheart and Candela Obscura and, and, and - but at the end of the day I really do hope that whatever form the final campaign wrap-up takes, they burn the damn questions asking the cast "what if the world was made of pudding and this character and this character kissed?" and instead pick questions that get them to introspect for a potential Campaign 4. Otherwise I don't know what will happen, but it sure as hell won't be Mighty Nein part 2: Issylra Boogaloo.
#well now why can#joe schmoe level 20 champion fighter beat god#cr spoilers#none of these are my unique observations; like any good review paper introduction it brings other people's work together#like a bad review paper I am not citing my sources though because i do that enough in work#i am just. so. tired. of this campaign not working on every level#that post about how predathos-as-boss and predathos-as-lore-entity are opposed really sums this campaign up: inconsistent across so many#story beats tones and themes that it brings the whole world down with it. this is also why i'm not a fan of fighting the gods in ttrpgs#you end up either obliterating a party who are underequipped to fight a genuine god; or your god loses and people wonder . so you justify it#it would've been vastly more interesting if predathos could see mortals. could eat mortals. would eat mortals to get to its true prey#if we're going by tinkerbell rules for the gods surely eating the children clapping would get their attention and draw them out#but no. every punch pulled. every opportunity for a genuinely interesting narrative failed at the first hurdle#i fully expect (pessimistically) for the gods to roll over on a dc 20 persuasion check btw. i have no hope for a genuinely interesting end#critical role#cr discourse#bell's hells
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this is how Armand fans sound to me when they justify his actions in Paris because of his trauma

#this is not a criticism btw this is just an observation#I am also an Armand fan. Just a Claudia fan first#amc iwtv#interview with the vampire#Armand
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One thing i really appreciated about dead boy detectives is that that show was fighting tooth and nail to be as much of a monster-of-the-week, character centric, teens having sci fi shenenigans in their silly little urban fantasy bubble show as it could be despite its 8 hours streaming format. There are points in the show where that results in a bit of odd pacing which could have been avoided if they actually let them have a longer season but nevertheless i Adore the stubborness to keep that type of episode structure
#dead boy detectives#dbd#btw when i mention the pacing issues it's. just an observation not really a hard criticism i Love the show
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It truly is fascinating how Ashton Greymoore's mere existence within these last 3 to 4 years exposed so many diet t/erfs and diet gender essentialists in this fandom
#this is not referencing anything in particular btw#this is just an observation#benefit of the doubt: there may just be a lot of baby queers in this fandom#who are new to seeing complex queer identities#but yeah there are also just. straight up t/erfy people in this community#critical role#ashton greymoore
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Sometimes I wonder if the Crane Wives and the Oh Hellos know that the MCYT community has fixated on their music and how they feel about it if they do.
#the crane wives#crane wives#the oh hellos#oh hellos#folk music#folk rock#mcyt#mcytblr#imagine pouring your heart and soul out into making a song#and then it gets latched onto by a bunch of teenagers/young adults#who thought it fit their block-shaped blorbo#this is not a criticism btw#i'm a hermitcraft fan lmao#just an observation
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"So.las doesn't care about modern elves" gods forbid somebody be allowed to grow and change for the better
#fandom critical#look this isn't about how any of you write him just a general observation#and i mean this btw. thinking about how he was essentially comatose for x thousands of years and spent ONE (in canon) with inky#and while that doesn't excuse his shitty opinions he acknowledges them and reflects#so no I don't think how he refers to the Dalish captives in vg is based in manipulation
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this post but instead of hamsters it鈥檚 tenno ocs (i am guilty of this too LMFAO)

#EVERYONE I KNOW HAS HAD THEIR TENNO GO THRU A DAMN MEAT GRINDER ITS SO FUNNY. WE NEED TO STOP TORTURING OUR LITTLE GUYS#dying badly and then coming back just builds character <3 it鈥檚 good for them i promise#this is an affectionate observation btw i would have absolutely no room to criticize laz literally lost all of his limbs and his eyes bcs#he died in an explosion not once not twice but SEVERAL times across realities#and then when his alternate forms coalesced into one being the void just split the difference and took Everything away
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I can't remember who said this but there was this one dev who said that when making romanceable characters they have to be attractive in some way (personality, looks, not too morally fucked up etc). and since I read that, the statement hasn't left my mind and I'm very aware now of whenever outside influence and modern discourse get to me or other writers. like just yesterday I found myself rewriting a scene to be more "comfortable" to witness, even though the point was to be emotionally charged and face a difficult topic the character had been actively lying about. but some things can't be glossed over. sometimes it's good when media grabs you by the shoulders and makes you face horrible shit. it's good when media makes you uncomfortable even if it's coming from a ~romanceable companion~. that means it's working. if you remain comfortable forever you learn nothing.
I bring this up bc the veilguard companions are the perfect example and victims of the "romanceable characters need to be attractive" mindset. they don't have ugly sides, they don't fight with each other--and I mean really fight--they don't have controversial opinions or do problematic things. they don't ever question your authority over their lives and why you're the guy in charge. they are nice and perfect and their problems aren't really that serious and can be fixed by simply having a therapy session w rook (bc being possessed or gaining new magic isn't a big deal in a world where previously such events are Very distressing and hard to control). they are further proof that trying too hard to make something attractive has the complete opposite effect if your brain isn't the size of a pebble.
it's overall very frustrating that big game developers continue to be so spineless and I'm not giving anyone a pass for shallow writing, especially from a franchise that is known to have complex characters. none of this is impressive after the first three dragon age games, which were well loved and dissected and debated for years after their release. that isn't to say these games don't have kind characters, having that balance is why I personally like dark fantasy and liked what the dragon age games offered (whenever the writing was good..). it's not dark for the sake of being dark (see grimdark), there's a reason why these things are happening, and in this world no one is completely innocent even if they have good intentions. most people like when their characters aren't always kind or agreeable, bc it's extremely rewarding to finally find that middle ground (of course I have to bring up larian, who made bg3 and proved just how much people appreciate flawed characters, see astarion). conflict is the driving force of a story, no matter what it is. even the most sickeningly sweet cozy slice of life story will have some kind of conflict. it's unavoidable. that's life. taking that away is setting yourself up for failure and all that remains is a boring story full of boring people. no one cares about characters who have their lives together.
(the post is technically over but I wanted to put some final thoughts under the cut bc this got longer than I meant)
I want to go back to the statement real quick... like i do agree, it's true as writers we'll subconsciously (or consciously if you're insecure) try to make our characters appealing, but this is the common trap writers fall into by giving a shit about what others think and want from Their work (which btw I fully believe in writing what you want even if it's "bad" because something with genuine soul will never be as bad as soulless cashgrabs). romanceable characters can and should be as flawed as you'd make any other character, bc trust me there's an audience for everything. even a random npc with two lines will be attractive to someone.
the pressure of an imaginary audience is what pushes writers into a corner and prevents writers from writing and exploring what They want. it's the writer's story first, not the audience's. I think the romanceable companion trap can be easily avoided if writers just 1) grow a bit of a backbone and 2) ask themselves if this is even a necessary or insightful mechanic that will help develop a character further. ask themselves if this character even has the capacity to handle a romantic relationship bc everything else is subjective and it's impossible to appeal to everyone (which apparently this is a controversial take). I won't sit here and pretend that I don't appreciate a good romance, but sometimes all someone really needs is a friend.
obsidian is a good example of self aware devs. they tried to do romance for pillars of eternity 2 bc of fan demand, and it didn't work very well. now for avowed, they didn't explore romance bc they know it's not their strong suit and don't feel it's necessary for this story, instead that time and effort went to developing the characters in other meaningful ways. I have nothing but respect for such a decision bc they know what they want from their story instead of lying and trying to be everything at once. less is more as they say.
#this was supposed to be a small post but . yk how it is#wrote this instead of working on my stupid art projects i am about to walk into the woods and never return i hate college#anyway. enjoy my rambling there's a point in there somewhere probably#nothing against the dev who said that btw i thought it was interesting for them to say since it is true#its hard to not think about the potential audience when creating something but we have to try to ignore them#i think i wanted to say more but whatever this generally covers my thoughts#and i know everything is subjective maybe people Do want their romanceable characters to be attractive and unproblematic#good for you. there's genres for that. but in a dark fantasy setting? some things just don't work like that. genres exist for a reason#i want my companions to be messy mfs not pretty perfect angels#also鈽濓笍dont be stupid i don't condone writers having personal agendas and writing hateful things#thats a completely different thing and obviously not what i meant#a writer should always be a neutral observer of their work. nothing else.#bioware critical#six speaks#oh also again... nothing wrong with um 'normal' and kind characters. but when everyone is like that it gets boring. variety ok
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crazy thought btw but i don鈥檛 think anyone in the main six is actually in love with anyone else aside from sand with ray, at least not where we are at this point.
there鈥檚 a case to be made for nick with boston, but i truly think he鈥檚 more obsessed with than in love with him. and while we鈥檙e TOLD ray is in love with mew, it鈥檚 very clear it鈥檚 way more idolization than genuine love. top and mew love the IDEA of one another without actually getting to know each other (top literally couldn鈥檛 name anything he liked about mew right before he said he loved him for gods sakes). boston, while i think he has some amount of feelings for nick (and possibly ray, bostonray truthers rise), it鈥檚 definitely not full blown love. and while ray has clear feelings for sand, he鈥檚 been too stubbornly focused on mew to let that grow into something more.
sand, however, has been shown again and again the darkest parts of ray and the best parts of ray and he comes back every time. he鈥檚 the only one actually in love which is also why i need him to grow a fucking backbone so ray doesn鈥檛 keep breaking his heart.
#this isn鈥檛 like. an anti any of these ships thing btw i find all of them compelling and not being in love isn鈥檛 some criticism#just an observation <3 my lovesick bby#only friends#ofts#my analysis#mine
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WAIIIITTT me thinking my sunless ground writing is bad and then revisiting seventh virtue where the writing is like this except probably a little "worse"
#I hate categorizing writing as good or bad etc#but I TRULY forgot what my genre writing looks like#like this is not even bad it's actually very good LOL it's just different#to my literary style that I've been soooo entrenched in#WHICH I find easy to read now but in comparison is reallyyyyyy much more ornamented#my sister said body back is a bit tougher to read bc it's so dense (not a criticism btw it was said very kindly just an observation)#WHICH really put things into perspective for me??? with the literary VS genre style??? like the literary style#IS denser it does more on a line level on account of... literary fiction LOL#SOOOOO I think I've been so used to it that I forgot the genre style doesn't and probably shouldn't be that way??#ANYWAY who would've known reading my genre fiction book would make this make more sense#I didn't feel bad about the writing being thinner btw it was more that I was like#is something missing?? is something off?? NO YOU ARE WRITING A DIFFERENT GENRE LOL
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Ah, I see! Still, we'll see how far I get!
#critical role#ramblings#campaign 1#c1e04#btw i only JUST realised (3rd time watching). that they're doing. pathfinder. and not technically 5e.#round of applause for me most observant of watchers lol
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i guess for mcr fans the sense of community is a determining factor
#seeing the band live is also one ofc#but the friend group meetings - traveling - going to multiple shows#< not a criticism btw#just something that i've observed so far and im reflecting on
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kind of fucked that planet zoo makes my computer hotter than final fantasy remake but i think thats the nature of simulators (have a fuckload going on regardless of actual optimization) as opposed to an action rpg (unsure of how optimized it is; got it to run really well tho)
#still not close to critical/'uh oh! oh no!' temps btw just making a mental note on my public diary about it#but like i said#nature of the simulators i think; you couldnt actually cook eggs with the sims 3 for no reason after all#tho tbh ts3 was optimized SO fucking badly and it only would get worse#but like i think at some point ff7r like built some kind of cache or whatever or Something because i also observed that like#the fans on my graphics card would not be spinning which means it wasn't getting hot enough to kick them on#pzoo IS making them spin. so hm. hmmmm
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